Struggling to get a full grip with his situation,
he felt the weight of the world on his shoulders.
Gasping for air under the extreme crush,
he was panicked over the constraint.
How would he extract himself from this situation?
Then he heard,
“Get off your father’s back, you two.
You know he gets claustrophobic.”
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23 comments:
Ha..ha...I do like the picture ~
Happy thanksgiving ~
ha. so they are like my boys...they have learned ways to make me hurt when we wrestle...
happy thanksgiving monkey
gasp...
whew, thank goodness they got off. Now you can enjoy your turkey dinner! Happy Thanksgiving Monkey!
Woah, that picture is intense.
haha...boys like to be boys :) Happy Thanksgiving, MM :)
Give them time. They'll come up with something far worse!
At 17 & 19, my two are a bit old for this type of horse play, but this was conjured by some old memories.
Atlas had a Father?
And a Mother?
Now a 55?
Great Job MM.
Thanks for playing, Happy Thanksgiving to you, Rachel, and your beautiful family.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End
love those horsey ride memories on my Dad's back, I'm sure our body weight wasn't all that he hand on his shoulders either
ha! Those boys need to take it easy on the old man... especially when he has a full tummy! :) In a few years, the grandkids will "arrive" and will weigh a lot less!
Phew! Rescued.
Loved the ending, and the pic is great.
When I was starting to get too big for piggy-backs my dad used to tell me he couldn't carry me because 'I've got a bone in my arm'. Took me ages to catch on to the fact that I was being conned!
LOL, great last few lines, really enjoyed that 55!
Jamie
Happy back at you ..... from monkey me to monkey you.
ha ! sweet burden isnt it ?
Cute. They are the weight of the world, aren't they? Love that picture too.
I thought maybe it was two really fat cats...
Kids makes more sense.
I know how he felt. I am claustrophobic too.
I remember those days... all five of us kids used to pin my Dad (and he, exhausted from running a chainsaw and logging all day, let us) and take great pride in seeing how long we could hold on.
Usually, not for long. In his day, he was a State wrestling champ. He never forgot his moves.
Loved the photo you used for this one- you do a great job of adding a neat twist at the end and confounding the reader.
nice hook....when my son reach 200 pounds (@14) I tossed in the towel
Peace
MASSIVE
resolved as light as a leaf!
Aloha from Honolulu
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Luckily someone came to the rescue! ;-)
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