Darkness left the sky
as explosions filled the void.
It was at once beautiful
and deathly.
Shells screamed and burst
with unforgiving fire.
July 4 was a thrill.
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Here's wishing all of you a Happy Fourth of July...even if you don't live in the States.
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24 comments:
Beautiful, tragic juxtaposition - love it.
Here's mine:
One for the road
I love Independence Day! No illegal fireworks at our house this year. Last year the sheriff visited and almost gave us a $2000 ticket. I think I'll it safe this year. Boo.
Love this... tragic, yet celebratory... always a contrast bursting in the skies.
Beautiful sky fires.
In my neighborhood it's illegal but already we've got the fireworks flying all around us.
I hope these people save some for Monday.
Happy Independence Day, MM.
My 160 is here.
Happy 4th of July MM!
A very colorful booming 160.. :)
Sunday hugs xox
Here's my "not so" colorful 160!
Achromatic II
xx
OMG! Sunday already?
I'm late.
I'm late.
I'm late.
Already posted a BLONG.
("Blong" is "Long Blog"!)
Your thrill of July 4 I enjoyed! And hope everyone stays safe...AND THRILLED!
PEACE!
Enjoyed it!
Here s mine:
gravitational pull
MM
Happy 4th and a safe one over at your place, fireworks booming can be thrilling and a little unnerving for some, my dog for one, goes berserk,
nice S-!60 photo too.
joanny
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/2011/07/heart-it.html
Happy 4th, MM. We had our big party on Friday for Canada Day, though kids were still lighting off the leftovers last night. :)
Mine is HERE.
And the Rockets Red Glare!
Happy Fourth to You Rachel, and the Family.
My Pyrotechnics are just WAITING for tonight!!
hehehehehe...I played
Hope you have a great July 4. I did you a 160 this week
Nice touch!
I will have to join you on this sometime. Happy 4th of July ~
I am looking forward to stepping out my front door to watch the beautiful fireworks.
I WILL twist your arm and get some sparklers, at least. Right? Pretty please?
Nice imagery with words, as usual.
Happy 4th...
It is so dry in Texas right now, although it DID rain just yesterday, that they banned all fireworks in the area that I live. Boo! But, I guess burned down houses and wildfires would be a worse thing.
What? No orgasmaprose today? Heehee. Have a good one, buddy!
Happy 4th of July, MM!
http://bodhirose.wordpress.com/2011/07/03/happy-4th-of-july/
Great 160. Have a fabulous 4th of July!
Happy 4th, MM.
I like the imagery in this, and how something as celebratory as the fourth of july could act as a foil for something tragic like war and fighting. very good job with this one.
Awesome piece! I was just telling Madelene the other night while we were watching the fireworks, "Could you imagine if that was war you heard about 2 miles from us?" Scary if you think about it . . . Odd how they came up with that type of celebration, right?
Sounds like that 'night' before the 'flag was still there...that Star Spangled Banner, still waving 235 years later, Hmmmmm?
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