Silhouetted by the dampened glare of street lights,
the beautifully curved form glanced skyward
trying to find romance in stars
lost to the impenetrable gray
of late night clouds.
Her long graceful fingers
slowly sliding over her slender waist
and round hips
as if imagining her hands
as those of a longed for lover.
Wetness dripped tears of rain
down the window before her,
matching the mascara tinted dew
falling from her lashes.
She hoped the rain
would wash away the gloom
and once again flood her heart
with the love of another.
She felt deserving
and knew desire.
But wanted a real
and tender love
tinged with passion
yet full of understanding.
It was there for her
if she had patience.
If she could wade through
the shallow puddles of a man
and find the depth of soul
to match the soul she carried within.
The silhouette slipped on her rain boots
and walked out into heaven’s tears
in search of puddles to splash
and deep waters from which to drink.
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39 comments:
Hello - this is lovely 'flood her heart with the love of another' - gorgeous! Not so 'monkeyman' methinks! :)
wow - this is beautiful, passionate and full of well expressed emotions - gorgeous
Outstanding imaginary – full of emotions
Bravo!!
Very sexy and emotionally written monkeyman. Really enjoyed the read.
Not bad, MM!
(But mine was deeper: Still Waters Run Deep )
Now this was a touching one, here - romantic and passionate and full of heartwarmingly fine imagery. May the silhouette find and drink and know joy.
The last 2 lines were amazing.
Good thematic consistency (rain/emotion) and flow, strong work.
Always the ones with the beautifully curved forms, I tell ya. Still, a nice, slow, processional piece with some excellent lines. Liked 'wading through the puddles of a man.." I think I may have done that a time or two. Enjoyed it.
beautiful monkey...love the playfulness there at the end...splashing in puddles and drinking deep...
My favorite part: "If she could wade through
the shallow puddles of a man
and find the depth of soul
to match the soul she carried within."
Why do I think you know me?
How do you come up with this stuff?
Not Bad at all Brother....
Good stuff, MM. I especially like the last two lines. Those are two ambitions worth going out in thr rain for.
Once again, MM, you seem to read my soul. I'd say more, but I have tears in my eyes.
I am carried away with the expresions you have used in here..it is filled with every bit of an extremes and yet, sensitive.
Thanks MM for sending me your warm thoughts..and sending you and Mrs M lot of loving wishes too. ;)
Silver
This is just BEAUTIFUL ... it made me tingle all over, beautiful!
MM
Love this... loved the ending, passionate & playful reminded me of the lyrics by Bob Dylan " Just Like a Woman....
joanny
Oohh..those were some really well woven words in there! Richly vivid imagery, accompanied with a great choice of words, MM!!
"shallow puddles of a man" -- I really loved the visual formed by this line (without wanting to sound gender biased or anything of that sort)!!!
Great work, my friend!
oh, the still waters really do run deep...
A beautifully expressed poem.
Anita.
Wow this was a beautiful poem. Well written and great flow. It struck a cord with me. A heartfelt thank you for sharing.
Yes enjoyed this... but could have used a stanza-break or two for breathing-space. Solid write though, sure.
Best
Luke @ WordSalad
Beautiful Monkey man..different from your style..awesome and elegantly sensual.last lines are haunting..:)
I especially enjoyed the end!
Thanks-
Absolutely beautiful....in tone, form and rhythm. Lovely.
a mushy piece... a melancholy tone :)
I can completely relate to the emotions you express here... longing, love, hesitation, worry, fear.
Rhyme Me a Smile
That longing, the fear, and all. It touched me...
places
This is so tender. It touches the heart. Lovely.
wow! That is full of sensual imagery! I like this a lot!
I just loved this one
What a pretty write!
I like the line, "she felt deserving and knew desire but wanted love" this is a nice poem friend
Wow! Always a pleasure to visit your blog!
"If she could wade through / the shallow puddles of a man / and find the depth of soul" Here's hoping she can. Elegant lines throughout that stir emotions. Cheers
You're right. I do love this. Great images, you captured longing and searching so very well. Especially loved those last four lines.
I enjoyed reading this one.. If she could wade through the shallow puddles of a man and find the depth of soul... what a lovely lines...
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