Tossing and turning
his mind raced through the day’s events.
Reminders of his foreboding missteps
made his stomach churn
in ways he never knew were possible.
What had he done?
Why had he done it?
How had he let impulse control him so?
One thing was certain:
He would never eat at Taco Bell again.
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37 comments:
I believe this is NON-Fiction..:-)
Excellent 55 MM...
Thanks for posting early, I know how you feel about doing things on time.
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
fire sauce...gets me every time...but i love it...nice 55 monkey...and good job being flexible...smiles.
I NEVER have this experience. I always go prepared with my 'little pink pills' (Pepcid AC) Works like a charm.
Cute 55.
Mine is up.
PG
Ha ha ha! This has never happened to me with Taco Bell but I do have regrets that keep me awake and tossing and turning.
Great post!
It's the re-fried beans. They'll keep you running all night long.
monkey man--I do believe you have Brian to thank for your latest inspiration ;-)happy 55!
Sounds more like revenge than regret.
Great 55!
CMJ - Just coinicidence. I hadn't read Brian's Mag Pie Tale until you drove me to check out what might be the source of your comment. Indeed, there are similarities.
Time to pay the proverbial piper! That Taco Bell will getcha good... *grins*
It's chillies with everything in Thailand.
the thought of taco bell turns my stomach! I love the suspense...leading up to the "taco bell"
Aloha ha from Waikiki
Comfort Spiral
I don't usually eat at Taco Bell. Now I'll definitely steer clear of the place now. I'm on Rx aciphex in the morning and Rx famatodine in the evening for a gastric ulcer - can't afford to have my stomach hurt more than it does. I won't forego a glass of good wine, regardless.
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Ah, horror. I like it ;-)
As they say in Bradford, England, Burn you in, burn you out strength. Here's mine
I like Taco Bell but only if Tums are available.
Running for the border always has its risks.
I love Taco Bell! This 55 was hilarious!
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very fine tuned 55,
the words dance into my mind and make exciting stirs...
Happy Friday!
This one made me laugh!
ouch!!!! good one.
We don't have Taco Bell here but if its anything like Nandos I can relate.
Pull us in and then SLAM us with a joke---I love it!
Hope you're doing well my friend!
LOL..I so feel the pain. But I love Taco Bell to the max. :) I'm just laughing so hard at this :) Too funny. Have a great weekend my friend. :) Bon Appetit!!
Oooh yeh... refried beans & chilli sauce'll do that! So the morning after you were sporting the burning ring of fire...as my husband would so elequently word it! Great 55!
heehee....
yo quiero Taco Bell!
Ah, guilty pleasures. Well... let's put "pleasures" in quotes, shall we? I have similar weaknesses for McDonald's, and Kentucky Fried Chicken!
Thanks for visiting mine!
lol, I agree that there's a good chance this was based on a true story... :P
Sending you some fictional Tums to help reolve any non-fictional issues.
Great 55
he,he,he that is so funny my brother feels the same way about taco hell but for a different reason, i would blog about it but he sometimes reads my blogs and i would hate to piss him off!! great 55
hey monkey man, great 55! the process from 'great idea' to 'bad choice' in so few words...it was perfect!
oh dear...I do not remember ever having that...but I feel for you!
hugs
shakira
But I love Taco Bell! It's the only fast food I actually eat.
Woo-hoo! That was awesome. and I know from experience NEVER to eat at Taco Bell again.
Great 55.
jj
I couldn't comment the other day
There are things worse than Taco Bell tho (ever had a greasy fish taco)
Happy sunday my friend
tried to get into your 55 comment today - couldn't access - last weekend same thing :(
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