He slumped on the steps
of the church
holding his aching head
in his hands.
His skin so red
he nearly blended
with the chapel doors.
“God, help me,” he slurred.
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of the church
holding his aching head
in his hands.
His skin so red
he nearly blended
with the chapel doors.
“God, help me,” he slurred.
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If you wish to take the challenge, here is a quick look at the rules.
For the original Sunday 160 post click here.
The Sunday 160 only uses 160 characters (including spaces).
Keep on schedule - post Sunday.
Let me know you have posted via a comment on my site.
Visit at least one other Sunday 160.
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29 comments:
i am gobsmacked...its saturday night and monkey is posting his SUNDAY 160...lol.
metaphoricaly i been there...sometimes you have to get to that point...to realise you are not in control...
mine will be up in the morning...
I am intrigued and wonder where this would go if you could go beyond the 160... :)
I will be playing this week again...should have something up in the morning.
Brian the only way I can play is find the opportunity to create a 160 Saturday night. As a matter of fact I have my next flash Fifty five all typed oy and ready for the automatic posting ..lolguess i'm addicted eh ?
Ok mine is ready for Sunday
160 or bust
Moondustwriter (yes I am crazy)
A sad 160 but the man went to the right place for help!!
Nice..very expressive and honest.
Mine is here
hugs
shakira
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2 poetry awards,
2 friendship award...
Happy Sunday!
very impressive capture!
incredible 160.
I remember praying outside and inside of churches for God to help me.
HE DID!
PG
a powerful presentation, monkey man! how many times have i been on those exact same steps myself? many.
you are the man and i am loving your 160 offering today, thanks!
alright, i am up monkey!
It be that way sometimes. Seems religion is getting big play in blogopia this morning.
Incredible imagery.
I'm on in 160
http://wp.me/pDORj-AY
Moondustwriter
uh, um, my bad...my 160 is up!
Nice 160. And I´m up this week again!
I hope he gets the help he is praying for.
Nicely done.
Pearl
I feel sad for him...
Great 160 MM!
Hope your week is awesome!
(Per your comment, No raises until I get another one!)
:)
My 160 is 'finally' up. :)
PG
I felt that one!! mine is up finally. Happy Sunday!
that mark harmon thing? you can admit it to me...i promise i won't tell ;)
not sure where to post this but shall stick it in here. did say comments, moondustwriter directed me to here.
"Sealed with a flightless pigeon, carrying a note of love, on a rainy day in Scotland, the marridge proposal will be accepted, by a lady of crimson red love"
The picture and words, good melding.
What a punch you packed in 160 characters (including spaces). Sad and touching.
He also might just be severely constipated.
All jokes aside, I really enjoy your writing!
He's in the right place for help.
excellent.
God help me, indeed.
Excellent
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