Oddly at first,
then in an almost timed pattern.
On.
Off.
On.
Off.
It was mesmerizing to him.
Sending him into a trance like state.
Hypnotized to the point
of near hallucination,
he was finally brought back
when he heard her speak:
“Stop that blinking. You're making me crazy.”
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32 comments:
Great last line. Enjoyed it.
ha ha ha That is a great piece of writing there Bud!
very clever ending, didn't see that coming...
Excellent....[blink]too funny.....[blink] Very enjoyable.
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smiles. i remember...what is you get stuck like that...or cant stop...you want to do that for the rest of your life..ok, already i'll stop...nice 55.
mine is up!
That was a great ending. I laughed. Great 55!
I’m up right HERE
Clever clever clever. We all should be more like that.
Well done Mr MM. You cracked me right up with that one.
My 55 is Love returned
LOL! that is so funny!
You have a very unique way of looking at the world - I love it!
Love it; very funny! You're great with surprising last lines.
This is one for teaching high school students about effective/memorable endings. :) Nice work.
Here's mine
I need to do that when I play video games with my kids. I forget to blink...
Here's my 55 here
Blinking? LOL! The boy is tripping.
Oh, this was hysterical. I loved it.
One Single Impression - Insomnia
You are a clever little monkey!
Mine's Up: The Loft
That is terrific! I remember doing that when I was a kid... just passively blinking could send me right into a time warp.
Well done, MM. And the last two sentences... perfect.
Fun fun fun, MM. You're always capable of that topsy-turvy final line. How long does it take to dream up these things?
LOL...you got me!
No--I've NEVER done anything like that...I SWEAR!!!!!
Excellent 55, sir!
Aw, gee, the poor guy's just trying to have some harmless fun, and she has to spoil it!
too funny. ☺
I read this to the Monkees theme-blinking in time to the music! Great 55!
Very smart.. didn't see it coming. Was thinking of someone driving a long straight road
I was expecting something MUCH more sinister...hahahahaha
Excellent 55 MM.
Thank You so much for being such a fine and faithful player!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End Brother!!
Monkeying around is FUN!
Aloha, Friend
Comfort Spiral
You're winking at me, right? That's why I say you're driving me crazy?
You're winking at me, right? That's why I say you're driving me crazy?
Indeed, it is very addictive. lol
You got us all blinking now.
Lovely 55.
hugs
shakira
This was a first time, non-fiction laugh out loud for me.
You had me all curious and mesmerized in a sci-fi state of mind until you opened my eyes....Ha!
Still giggling.
still,
and yet still....
LOL...too funny. I love this my friend. Have a great weekend :)
That was hysterical! I never know where you're taking us.
i see the wifey might not have enjoyed the tranquilizing light blink ;)
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