Black clouds pushed the horizon
into a vortex
of color sucking blindness.
Joy became sadness.
Beauty shriveled
to hideousness.
Love fell deep into indifference.
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18 comments:
Bummer. Stand inhale deeply and blow the clouds back were they came from.
I can feel the clouds rolling in. Very well done.
The Simple Things Challenge
heavy...i can see those clouds...my 160 will be up in a bit...
alright...mine is up...
So sad... so sad... but true.
I almost got engaged last year; and now when i think of him.. i feel NO LOVE for him at all .. except for the 'love we should feel for all humanity'.. but not a special man/woman love.
The more he revealed himself; the more i realized his true character and became judgmental; and than it turned into indifference.
The colors were once vibrant and vivid and than black..
so sad... thanks for this 160..
mine is up too now. (thanks for this each week)
Powerful 160. Oh gosh, I hope those clouds stay away.
Sounds like Monday Morning after the superbowl!
Ouch...indifference...from love to indifference...what could be worse?
Love can be just like a black cloud sucking you into a vortex.
We must appreciate this new genre.
"pushed the horizon" - I really like that.
Really good and the picture is perfect.
I made it I know it's late for a Sunday–160 but I'm posted as of now just follow the link provided.
Dog Gone
Beautiful picture and amazing.
"Color sucking blindness." That is really cool.
verrryyy dark. almost feels like a black hole......great job conjuring emotion, as always!
Very powerful, MM! I can definitely relate to this.
gold
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