At first he just glanced.
Then caught himself staring at her curves.
The graceful way she moved.
He trembled with excitement.
He was seeing
his first Jaguar XJ.
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Then caught himself staring at her curves.
The graceful way she moved.
He trembled with excitement.
He was seeing
his first Jaguar XJ.
___________
This is a Sunday 160. If you wish to take the challenge, here is a quick look at the rules. For the original Sunday 160 post click here.
The Sunday 160 only uses 160 characters (including spaces)
Keep on schedule - post Sunday
Let me know you have posted via a comment on my site
Visit at least one other Sunday 160 (if they exist)
20 comments:
I've seen my husband looking just this way too many times to count;) Awesome Sunday 160!
shouldn't have added the pic
the punchline was obvious
B&R - Actually, this is Mrs. MM's dream car.
Dianne - Good suggestion.
If you bypass the haiku on my Sunday post, you'll find a 160 as of 1 a.m.
Very clever!!
my lame one is up
If this is the wife's dream car I hope you have a good set of tools and the wherewithal to know how to use them.
tee hee...i understand the feeling...
my 160 is up, thats for popping by...
sorry had to drop it early...dont have net at the house so its hit or miss when i might be on...having fun with the 160s...thank you.
Sounds like my husband. :)
I'm popping over from Brian Miller's... and I tried out the 160 for the first time. It is harder than I thought!
my 350z does this to me, heee heee heee
Hope you know those Jaguars are just for looking.
Hubby made a mistake of purchasing one and promptly go into bankruptcy. It served him right to fall in love with appearances.
fun concept & post
Oh, you include the spaces also! Maybe one Sunday!
I saw one yesterday! I thought that she was beautiful too! Hope you received one for your birthday!
Thanks for your comment! I'm taking your advice.
Thanks!
The long slinder stream lines,the busty head lamps, the smooth shape of her body, the slap at the back of my head from the mrs finally brought me to reality.
This is awesome Monkey man. It takes you to one place and then drops you at another. Perfect!
Soft love,
T
and here i was hoping it was a goil.
ok
jag isnt too bad, i guess...
Hi,
not sure what you meant on my post "verification word - coves" would you mean to put that in the haiku?
Let me know, or are you using it for a prompt?
Happy new day, Di
XJL. Copper. Beige leather with that sexy double moonroof. 387. Leaper. Uh huh.
Give me 6 months, I'll make it happen...it's time to hand down the blue one to the boy, after all...
What a great way to describe a car. Short, sweet and to the point.
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