The fog rode in
on the back of winter's cold,
piercing with its icy chill
any warmth it could find.
Disfiguring all in its path
with an enveloping blur.
Monochrome reigned.
Stealing color
as it rolled over the countryside.
Feathers fluffed.
Hair on ends.
Heat - a precious commodity
with frozen fog ravaging the land.
13 comments:
Fog is beautiful if over the water and not having to travel through it.
...stealing color...
Love this phrase.
Evocative.
great descriptives here...monochrome reigned...stealing color...love it!
Brrrr.... This is a lovely poem in spite of the chill I can feel through the words.
I'm cold just from reading this. No wonder I want to move south when I retire.
This is beautiful. I love the mystery of fog. I wrote a poem some time ago about fog.
This was really good. Thank you.
PG
Beautiful and haunting. jeNN
I love the fog seeing as I am always in one.
chilling, yet beautiful...
I hope you are describing the weather outside...very chilling. Blessing and happy holidays to you and Ms. MM!
Thank you.. the hug was helpful. ;) My love to you and Mrs MM too ;))
love & hugs,
~Silver
Precious indeed....
No heat around these parts for awhile brother...
You have a way with words, Monkey Man!
Hope you have a Merry Christmas!
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