and to hear
“I love you”.
She didn't know how to ask.
He wanted to touch her and say
“I love you”.
He couldn’t get by his stoic past.
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26 comments:
how come everything you write sounds strangely familiar? Well except for Wednesdays and I sure hope they're not familiar to me!
I agree with the Diva. This seems very familiar.
Do you happen to know how to make a good snow angel?
I can only make good snow angels when I am wearing shorts and a t-shirt.
:-o
Beautiful poem! My 160 is on similar lines! Could Have Been
well this is all too familiar and very similar to me un-160, just could not get it cut down this week man...sorry. def next week...and what a waste, so much love to be had if only they could...
Heartbreaking. It left a little knot in my belly.
MM....?
Maybe we need to call Dr. Phil...
I'll be up by 1:00 (REal Time)
A tale of communication.
Ah yes....we've all been there.
Oh gal.. That's so sad!
Here's my hilarious Accident!
So true of many, and so well written as always.
Ohhhh!
So very familiar.. I am still yearning! I think I've gotten past; one dream n I'm sobbing again.. alas!!
Burning Soul
Weekend hugs xoxox
A set of too well remembered pasts is their only impediments.
That's really sad. Because there are probably thousands of people out there with just that kind of problem who are missing out on love as a result.
I've done 160 here.
This is so familiar...I am still waiting...
Here is mine:
if only he could see behind
Communication between two people can be so complicated.
I hope he gets over his stoicism and she finds a way to ask for what she needs without ruining the mood for herself by having to ask for something she feels he should know to give.
At this point, I don't have a 160 for the week. If some inspiration strikes, I'll let you know. Have a great week Monkeyman, and by they way... Nice legs. (I may have stopped by PG's place before yours.)
An impossible love story, my friend... and a good lesson in 160!
Today I have one too:
http://felicitas-metamorphosis.blogspot.com/2011/06/160-view.html
Sad, relatable, excellent.
Here's mine.
And that is the plot of half of what I write.
Mine is up
If they can't get by their fears--not much happiness can happen... Very good, MM--a common dilemma for some people.
Here's mine today:
http://bodhirose.wordpress.com/2011/06/12/sitas-paw/
Aww...we are all often trapped by ourselves and our fear of speaking up.
I'm a little late, but I'm in. Mine is here.
oh, saucy this week.
sort of sad noir.
me too
http://fillingahole.wordpress.com/2011/06/11/more-sunrise-conversations/
Ach, the tragedy of it all. If only we would just follow our hearts more.
A quiet weekend, begot quiet words from me today.
It tugs on my heartstrings.
MM, you old softie - that was very sweet.
spot on!
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