Staring in amazement
at rugged basalt cliffsrunning along the course
of the mighty Columbia River,
she watched scrub juniper
and rolling fields
slowly transform
into oak and pine
that reached to the sky.
Snow covered mountains
rose in the distance
inciting awe and excitement she had never before felt.
Was this her new home?
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45 comments:
great snaps...i wish i lived nearer to them...quite the adventure i imagine...nice 55 monkey...
Love your new style, evocative. Be careful there MM, or we will have a whole nest of people coming to Or-e-gon, to partake in the splendors you so eloquently wrote and photgraphed.
Cheers,
Joanny,
I am still responding to Thursday post, how do you do this so fast,
I would love to live here! nicely done :)
You're on a sweet roll.
How does it seem that you always write something that is just right for me at just the right time?
It IS indeed a beautiful state!
Excellent continuing Family Saga 55
Great story telling My Friend.
Thanks for playing, and being such a great support.
And please, have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
That bottom pic looks very much like parts of NZ. Excellent!
those are indeed awe-inspiring sights. she must have gasped to see them the first time.
Beautiful pictures and post.
just such an amazing tease to wat comes next, very well written 55.
Gorgeous words and visuals. I'm along for the ride, hope this is not yet the end of the line.
-C
I really like how the story is unfolding, Monkey Man. Such gorgeous scenery. I rememer the fist time I saw the Rockies from a distance, I was amazed.
Alaways great to read your posts.
Awesome 55 - love that you're continuing the story. You sure do make every word count!
Gorgeous! I felt like I was seeing it in person from your description. I wonder if she will stay...
amazing pics with the story.
and would any of us be so brave?
HAKAWE, as Gman says.
Dianne
She chose a wonderful state in which to settle! Ocean, mountains, the best of the West!
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beautiful pictures and beautiful words.
Mine is also up.
Great descriptive words.
You made this so real, it was like being there. It is just stunningly beautiful. Excellent my friend. Have a great Friday :)
This is an eye opener...I've only read part III....I need to catch up.
A new life, a new home, a beautiful new dreamscape. This was nice.
Here's Mine. Yes, I finally did one...long time no see!!!
Have a super weekend.
A "3 x 1" 55? I make that a 165, but who's counting? lol :)
I'm really enjoying this story. (Tale? History?) I look forward to next wek's installment.
Awesome imagery for 55! Loved it!
Oregon is so beautiful.
Wonderfully descriptive 55, MM!
Have a great weekend!
Powerful words and powerful landscape and powerful photos.
wonderful imagery
I can understand the excitement of someone who is shifting to live in the Picturesque Oregon!
I have never seen snow in my life! Hope to do so some day...
like the pic - and my favorite line was..slowly transform
into oak and pine…
This 3rd installment is my favorite so far. Beautifully written and so evocative.
Nice. Nice verse, nice pictures.
I can only imagine how wonderfully exciting and scary this must have been. I really am enjoying your epic 55 family adventure.
Teresa
I can only imagine how wonderfully exciting and scary this must have been. I really am enjoying your epic 55 family adventure.
Teresa
oh, this was gorgeous...very, very nice 55
oh, this was gorgeous...very, very nice 55
I'm loving your story - glad you are exercising your creative muscles
Nice 55 MM
See ya Sunday
Nice 55... Loved it..
True Love
True Love Never Ends
--Someone Is Special--
Awesome continuing story. I imagine what it must have felt like to arrive at some place so radically different than the place I left.
I look forward to this one every week! I love knowing the rest of the story.
You're telling it well, kindly keep on!
very strong and convincing 55.
well put.
my 55
Happy Belated Friday!
Not bad for a human.
Beautiful. That last picture takes my breath away.
I'm really loving this story, MM. Names like Willa Cather, Edna Ferber and Pearl Buck keep floating into my mind.
how excited she must've been!
The pictures and prose meld perfectly together. Wonderful.
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