Hate inspired adrenaline
kept him alert
during the six hour drive
across the rolling
wheat covered hills.
Revenge was his prime motivation.
The excitement of the hunt
made him feel more alive
than he had felt in months.
Finally, he would remove
the monkey from his back
and rid the world
of this horrible predator.
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29 comments:
He certainly came alive. Tight and gripping.
MM ~ I'm hoping you have a follow-up on this one. Or a short story. It made my heart race a little bit to know what the hell is going on!
Thanks for stopping by earlier.
Friday Flash 55 ~ Silvia's Smile
I have 'flashes' of a movie as I read this...road rage....the movie? The Duel.
Long long ago tho.
Excellent work once again, for us 55'rs.
My 55 for the week, is HERE As always, scroll down past my Friday's Show n Tell to find it. Have a glorious day.
I'm likin' it Monkey Man.
Love it.. don't we all have that monkey are our back at one time or another.
My 55 is up.
oh, i wanna know who he's after...nice 55 monkey!
mine is up!
Nawww Perfect!
Wanting more is part of the fun!
Excellent 55 MM.
Thanks for this very intirguing story, and thanks for visiting.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
That's what the desire for revenge can do for you, as long as it doesn't win out in the end. The desire is great, its enactment may not be. It can wind up destroying you.
Terrific poem.
I'm with Brian. Who is he after, and what did te predator do? No, wait don't tell me. I suspect it would be too horrible.
Flash Fridays! Woooo!
Better watch out for vigilantism, tempting though it be.
Go get 'em, MM! This one calls for a prequel and a sequel... write on :)
Yes! Revenge is a dish best served cold. But I admit to being left wanting more....
You're good, MM.
WOW...this is really good stuff, MM.
I want more , please?
EXCELLENT...
BRAVO!
see you on Sunday?
hugs
shakira
Revenge is bittersweet: so much pleasure goes into planning it, and so little satisfaction comes from acting upon it. Great 55!
Revenge is like rust, it eats itself.
Depends on what type of revenge. I hope it is sweet and I hope we get to find out what it is. Excellent my friend. :) Well done. Enjoy your weekend :)
I would like to request further information? Who was the monkey? What did the monkey do to make him drive for 6 hours to have is revenge?
Very intriguing - Monkey Man!
this guy needs an anger management class. I think he may have been at my 55 earlier in the day
thanks for the visit
I kinda got the feeling that the "monkey" is the predator and he's about to take care of what's been bothering him! That was just my interpretation! Great 55...love those thought provoking stories :)
We have to wait till next Friday to find out what's next? Tell me it isn't so.
I'll wait. :)
PG
This is good! Now, what happens next?!? :)
Great 55!
-C
I can feel the rage! Well written. Hope you´ll have a great weekend!
some fuckers simply deserve to die and then God can sort it out.
i accidentally posted my 160 on my blog early. What was I on last night???
breathing too much moondust
I want to know what happens next!
Yeah, I want to know what happened before and what happens after.
it is Friday 55,
you got readers with your 55,
no more,
no less,
let us guess the rest,
what a talented story teller!
I feel the rage
on the driver's long driving hours...
unbeatable 55.
Happy Sunday!
I hope you aren't the monkey. :-)
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