Sunday, October 17, 2010

Sunday 160 - Fall's Cold


A golden eye squeezed open
and greeted the misty morning haze
with a shiver, unable to shake the chill.
Even a fiery display of color
couldn't warm fall’s cold.
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For the original Sunday 160 post click here.
If you wish to take the challenge, here is a quick look at the rules:

1. The Sunday 160 only uses 160 characters (including spaces).
2. Keep on schedule - post Sunday.
3. Let me know you have posted via a comment on my site.
4. Visit at least one other Sunday 160.
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There are a few Oregonians out there who will recognize this setting.
For those of you from other areas, this is Mt. Hood.
Just an hour from downtown Portland.

28 comments:

Claudia said...

...a golden eye squeezed open...love this and the picture is fantastic

my 160 is here

Kerry O'Connor said...

This is vividly beautiful MM. I was captivated from the first few words. The entire poem is wonderfully cohesive.

Susannah said...

Wow, that is beautiful! 'A golden eye squeezed open' - What a wonderful 160!

I've done mine too. :-)

My 160 - Signposts

Su-sieee! Mac said...

Hi Monkey Man, I've come to play today. :-) I like the rhythm and pacing of your poem. It is what I think a crisp, cool autumn morning is.
Su-sieee! Mac
This and That. Here and There. Now, Sometimes Then.

Alice Audrey said...

I used the word shiver in mine, too, and I wasn't even talking about Fall.

Mine is here

Deborah said...

A beautiful 160 :o)

Brian Miller said...

ah there is a rather chill to the air this morning...the eyes has not risen yet though so its still dark as pitch...nice 160 monkey

my 160

Me said...

Fall's chill has been in the air for a few weeks now, here in Ontario. I know about sunrises seen but not felt...but no spectacular mountains to view them against around here, though. Fabulous shot!

Mine is HERE .

-C

Prayer Girl said...

I think you've outdone yourself with this 160, if that's possible. The poem is stunning just like the picture.

HERE IS MINE

PG

5thsister said...

Beautiful imagery painted with your words. It feels just like that here this morning.

Mine is
HERE

gautami tripathy said...

What a word painting! Great photo too!

Here is mine:

totality

Cheryl said...

Gorgeous picture and love your 160.

Mine's here.

Strummed Words said...

Love that eye of gold
That can't defy the cold!

Very nice.

PattiKen said...

Beautiful, MM. And the photo is amazing. I once flew into Portland and saw Mt. Hood's peak up close and personal from the plane window. It was about as close as I ever want to come to a mountain peak while I'm in a plane.

I'm in with a little a wildlife fun

moondustwriter said...

what a perfect picture and a chilly 160. I guess there is no turning back - winter is coming

mine is Cracked

Thanks Keith for graciously doing this hosting biz week after week.

moonie smiles

gospelwriter said...

That is an awesome pic - love the words too. Great 160!

Mine's here.

Jhannet said...

I liked this. Definitely captured that innate chill of fall.

Mine's here http://randomthoughtsandmusings.wordpress.com/2010/10/17/tossed-aside-a-sunday-160/

Caty said...

that was so wonderfully descriptive...and it sure is getting chilly when the sun's not up!

Larry said...

Pretty cool picture there monkey man. Yes indeed cool picture. Nice to read you agaion and nice seeing you around my place also. I will be sending my link in soon for the Sunday 160. Until then salavee?

Betsy said...

It's perfect! Love the photo...goes with your words exactly!

liv2write2day said...

A beautiful representation of a beautiful part of the world.
Mine is here:
http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/10/17/thoughts-on-the-approach-of-november-2nd-sunday-160-my-200th-post/

And it's my 200th post!
Victoria

Matty said...

Perfect 160 to compliment a gorgeous picture.

Dianne said...

Very ethereal. I had to say something, cuz my brain was stuck on the Eye of Sauruman, from Lord of the Rings. Sorry, I read too much sci-fi and fantasy.

mine is up, happily this time!
HERE
have a chilling week!

Caty said...

Mine is up :)

Mama Zen said...

Gorgeous!

Unknown Mami said...

Wonderful imagery. Yesterday was the first day that I felt fall's cold.

Mona said...

that is paradoxically beautiful image. Happy fall.

Kelley said...

Oh, monkey man, monkey man...sorry I like your blog. It's your fault. Write worse. You don't have to "recognize" the award if you don't wanna. The point was that I was calling out blogs that I haven't been following long, you primate. Blog writing & colon cleansing could be a tough combo. :)