Pacing back and forth, back and forth.
Anxiety dripped from every pour
and an imperceptible growl
erupted from a face on the verge of a snarl.
The entire room stopped,
all eyes drawn to the restless figure.
Until a lone voice broke the silence,
exclaiming,
“For God sake, would someone please let the dog out."
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24 comments:
haha...before he wets on the carpet preferably...or in a house plant...smiles.
I know the song, let the dogs out,
what a lovely wonder-about..
enjoyed your 55.
;)
That is too funny! Everybody always waits for someone else to do it.
This is why I have cats.
They always stay indoors, and they bury their own poop in the litter box.
Usually.
(*ahem*)
Thanks for another Friday 55!
Mine's here. :)
Doggie Door!!
Loved your impending urinary explosion 55 MM.
Depending upon others for your relief is a bitch!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
LOL. You had me thinking lions and tigers and bears, oh my!
Wonderful! I always love your surprise endings.
Teresa
why the group inertia, I often ask...
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Poor dog! He's probably desperate for a pee!
:)
Cute!!! I was like, "You snarl??" lol
This was great as usual!
Yes! Every single morning! Thanks for the chuckle!
Thankfully, my two granddogs can use the doggie door and I don't have to worry about that chore...however, if I ignore them too long and they want attention, they pester me until I deliver the required cuddles and pats!!
Mine is at:
http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/08/friday-flash-55-playing-with-pooches.html#links
Have a delicious weekend!
He is awfully high maintenance, that brute. "Let me in, let me out..." I prefer the fish some mornings.
Happy Friday
lol! Brilliant! My dogs are chuckling, too, but my cats are laughing hardest :)
smiles. makes me think of my dog, great post
Always best out when need be :-)
Oh that was a nice twist at the end... Poor dog about to cross all his legs and then... he wouldn't have a leg to stand on.
Great and a fun...55 :)
Poor dog...ha.. ha...
oh great...now it is late and you've got me singing that stupid song, lol ~
LOL Oh I loved this!
That sounds familiar, but in reverse! Our large dog body slams the front door to get back in from the heat. Sounds like storm troopers attacking. ;)
and by "dog," she meant Monkey Man, right?
Haha, u make me laugh! :-D
woooof!!
grrrrrrrrrr... woof!!
hugs xo
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