A sliver pierced my eye
but I felt only admiration.
There was beauty and awe not pain.
I reached out through the blackness
unable to remove the celestial curve.
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If you wish to take the Sunday 160 challenge, here are the rules:
1. The Sunday 160 only uses EXACTLY 160 characters (including spaces).
2. Keep on schedule - post Sunday.
3. Let me know you have posted via a comment on my site.
(Be sure to mention you have posted a 160. Provide a link if you can)
4. Visit at least one other Sunday 160 writer.
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35 comments:
You took the deep route this week, I see. Whenever you strive to reach the moon and miss, keep trying. Eventually you'll get there!
Here's mine. Thanks for hosting.
I was looking at the moon yesterday night while working on my paper, and it made me want to go out on a date that was not. :-l
*sigh*
here's mine
Now I feel like running out to look at the moon.
Mine is up
This one is different MM!
Yes, the moon does look different ever since it hit us at the nearest orbital point! Or is it my imagination?
Hypnotized
Sunday Hugs xx
My first Sunday 160 :
http://ladynimue.wordpress.com/2011/04/10/i-fly/
And i loved yours .. Love all about the moon :)
Nice post!! Will see the moon with a new perspective...
Here is my contribution:
http://wheneveridontgetbored.blogspot.com/2011/04/sunday-160-why-now.html
MM
Real nice! Yes the moon did look lovely tonight in the PNW, it appeared to me as the Cheshire Cat grinning mischievously.
Joanny
played 160.
I decided to be moonstruck too! :)
And here's the link...
I love the moon, in all its different phases. :)
I have something up this week, by the way.
Enjoy your Sunday, MM.
-C
nice. i find the moon rather enticing me self...appreciate you doing this each week monkey...i am bowing out this week, will be back next.
The 160 Sunday challenge...More counting...it is a jigsaw puzzle to this free spirit. But hey, next Sunday I will be up for it!
A sliver Moon, my favorite!
Peace, Jane
Gorgeous!
Mine is up!
It looks like a fingernail...
hehehehe...Great Job
I played...
Wonderful verse...
Here is mine:
poetic vacuum
I was looking up at that moon on Wednesday on the way back from a restaurant. I couldn't reac it either.
I got inspired and wrote this : http://khanvibes.blogspot.com/2011/04/unsent-text.html
:)
I got inspired too. And here's mine :)
http://musingsofjustanothergirl.blogspot.com/2011/04/words-ill-never-say.html
totally awesome! nice idea MM.
wow...I think I need to take a philosophy course before I can wrap my mind around this one. You're so smart my hunka-hunka burning Monkey Man love!...no disrespect meant towards Mrs. Monkey Man. :)
stunning imagery,
enjoyed the lines.
Happy Sunday.
Here is
My 160
That´s beautiful!
I´m up...but ooops I forgot to link, better go do that right away! :-)
I love the moon! Especially when it's in it's waning form.
I played.
Father of the Year
Hope I'm not too late!
http://www.goddesswrite.com/2011/04/success.html
and, i forgot to say, your 160 is amazing. i love those slivers!
beautiful!
I don't care how many words it is--it's a very good poem, MM. One of these Sundays I'll have to play your silly game. ;_)
Good piece, flows well.
Here's <a href="http://readingbypublight.blogspot.com/2011/04/s160picture-prompt3-word-week-paid-for.html>mine</a>.
Let's try this again.
Here's mine.
I admire the silver piercing in my eye as well. What can I say? I like shiny things...
hey this 160 is a nice idea!! I will try my hand this time!! And this 160 poem is so beautiful!!
I really like the words "celestial curve". Beautiful!
A whole new way to look at the moon. Also, I have awarded you with a Hug-a-Blogger award: http://above-the-norm.blogspot.com/2011/04/hug-blogger-award.html
I love this one! It's amazing how a few words can say so much and make me see things differently.
I wrote a Sunday 160 again! :)
http://khanvibes.blogspot.com/2011/04/unsent-text-defying-law.html
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