Thursday, April 14, 2011

55 - Red Stilettos


As he adjusted the brim of his fedora 
and turned up his collar 
to prevent the heavy rain 
from running down his neck, 
he saw her. 
Red skirt tightly pressed to her curves. 
Six inch stilettos 
accenting the shape of her calves. 
His heart raced, 
wondering if he could find those shoes in his size.
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42 comments:

Titanium said...

...in his size...???

OMG. Laughing myself stupid, here. That? Was freakin' unexpected. I'm here to tell ya that six inch heels are not very fun to wear.

Seriously. Maybe he can carry it off better than I could, though...

Brian Miller said...

to each his own eh? i prefer flats anyway...smiles

moondustwriter said...

mm I love my 6 in stilettos and men with the guts to wear them

nice one MM

dustus said...

"As he adjusted the brim of his fedora..." What a great opening line. Feel like I was hit with a sucker punch at the end after picturing the red dress line. lol Awesome

Stranger said...

And what would his size be? I do admire a man who isn't afraid to show off his feminine side.
You rock the twist!
Hot 55!

razzamadazzle said...

Sounds painful to these feet, but to each his own! Love the 55 that can make me laugh!

Teresa

Alice Audrey said...

LOL.

Well, maybe if he looks online.

- Alice

Elaine said...

Didn't see that punch line coming. Brilliant!

Autumnforest said...

Wow! Knowing what those shoes feel like on my feet, I'd let him have them for free.

Me said...

Well if he finds them, I hope he remembers to shave his legs...

:)

G-Man said...

MM...?
Getting in touch with your er 'sensitive' side?
Are those Nine West stilleto's? They are simply Fab!!
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Margaret said...

This is the winning 55 this week! LOL Oh my! So didn't see that coming.

Janna said...

LOL!
I love it!

kkrige said...

Love it! You can keep the height, but the colour is to die for! You would look mighty sexy in those shoes MM!

Shanae Branham said...

You have got to love this! Those shoes are gorgeous! I really enjoyed your post! Thanks for stopping by my triumph and tears blog and leaving some words of encouragement!

Enchanted Oak said...

You're exceedingly sharp this week, MM. Those shoes look like murder weapons. Wait. I'm having deja vu. They WERE murder weapons on one of the cop shows, weren't they?
Be careful.

MomsJournal said...

Whoa! LMAO Great 55! ;-) Does anyone still wear those cause when I think 6-inch stilettos I think street walker. I'm just sayin' :P

anthonynorth said...

Funny :-)
Enjoyed that.

A Daft Scots Lass said...

Anything is possible on the interwebs! Great 55.

You know I love my heels

Matty said...

LOL....this reminds me of a story my daughter told me. She was working in a Victoria's Secret when a male customer asked her for help in selecting a bra. She automatically assumed he was shopping for his wife/girlfriend and asked him for her size. He said, "it's for me". My daughter was speechless, and it took her a few moments to regroup and act professional. He actually went into the fitting room and tried them on.

Katherine said...

Your a crack up Matty ... Very funny little twist at the end .. he!he!he!

MorningAJ said...

Oh..... there are shops that cater for 'his size'.

Love your 55 this week!

Belinda Munoz said...

Love this! I'm ready to go shoe shopping with him!

Tammy said...

Simply FABULOUS!!

Adsila said...

I wish I could wear them but I would probably break my ankle. Kudos to those who can wear them no matter who you are.

Olivia said...

lolsssss
That was witty indeed!

I can wear them alright.. hey, do I have to walk or rrrr... stand?

Memento

Weekend Hugs xx

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Jannie Funster said...

LOL!

I neither saw that coming.

And you will find something very interesting that pertains directly to YOU in the script after my 55.

It's here.

Helen said...

Perfect! I have a friend in Minneapolis named Brian who would kill for those stilettos.

Lulda Casadaga said...

LOve it MM..I once thought of purchasing a variety of large sized women shoes and sellin them to men...that was way before the internet came along! :D

hope said...

You ALWAYS make me smile. :)

Now, please tell me you're not scheduling time this weekend to go buy a pair. ;)

Monkey Man said...

Fiction! Flash FICTION Friday.

Steve Isaak said...

Spring MUST becoming - so much light, lively, exemplary versifyin' goin' on (yours is no exception).

Dr. Heckle said...

Damn, I didn't think you saw me...

libraryscene said...

hope he found 'em...what a twist, excellent 55!

TALON said...

lol! Even though I've come to expect a brilliant twist in your 55s, Monkey Man, I'm always delighted and surprised every single time :)

Mama Zen said...

This cracked me up!

joanny said...

It must be all this rain we are having, high heels are great puddle jumpers.

joanny

PattiKen said...

Ah ha ha. I love the twist. And I'm really enjoying the image of some guy trying to maneuver about in 6 inch heels.

Unknown Mami said...

Thank you for the twist at the end otherwise it would have been far too predictable and that is just not your style.

The Bipolar Diva said...

That was awesome!

Pheromone Girl said...

Joanny's got the right idea. Jumping puddles is so much easier in good heels.