As he adjusted the brim of his fedora
and turned up his collar
to prevent the heavy rain
from running down his neck,
he saw her.
Red skirt tightly pressed to her curves.
Six inch stilettos
accenting the shape of her calves.
His heart raced,
wondering if he could find those shoes in his size.
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42 comments:
...in his size...???
OMG. Laughing myself stupid, here. That? Was freakin' unexpected. I'm here to tell ya that six inch heels are not very fun to wear.
Seriously. Maybe he can carry it off better than I could, though...
to each his own eh? i prefer flats anyway...smiles
mm I love my 6 in stilettos and men with the guts to wear them
nice one MM
"As he adjusted the brim of his fedora..." What a great opening line. Feel like I was hit with a sucker punch at the end after picturing the red dress line. lol Awesome
And what would his size be? I do admire a man who isn't afraid to show off his feminine side.
You rock the twist!
Hot 55!
Sounds painful to these feet, but to each his own! Love the 55 that can make me laugh!
Teresa
LOL.
Well, maybe if he looks online.
- Alice
Didn't see that punch line coming. Brilliant!
Wow! Knowing what those shoes feel like on my feet, I'd let him have them for free.
Well if he finds them, I hope he remembers to shave his legs...
:)
MM...?
Getting in touch with your er 'sensitive' side?
Are those Nine West stilleto's? They are simply Fab!!
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
This is the winning 55 this week! LOL Oh my! So didn't see that coming.
LOL!
I love it!
Love it! You can keep the height, but the colour is to die for! You would look mighty sexy in those shoes MM!
You have got to love this! Those shoes are gorgeous! I really enjoyed your post! Thanks for stopping by my triumph and tears blog and leaving some words of encouragement!
You're exceedingly sharp this week, MM. Those shoes look like murder weapons. Wait. I'm having deja vu. They WERE murder weapons on one of the cop shows, weren't they?
Be careful.
Whoa! LMAO Great 55! ;-) Does anyone still wear those cause when I think 6-inch stilettos I think street walker. I'm just sayin' :P
Funny :-)
Enjoyed that.
Anything is possible on the interwebs! Great 55.
You know I love my heels
LOL....this reminds me of a story my daughter told me. She was working in a Victoria's Secret when a male customer asked her for help in selecting a bra. She automatically assumed he was shopping for his wife/girlfriend and asked him for her size. He said, "it's for me". My daughter was speechless, and it took her a few moments to regroup and act professional. He actually went into the fitting room and tried them on.
Your a crack up Matty ... Very funny little twist at the end .. he!he!he!
Oh..... there are shops that cater for 'his size'.
Love your 55 this week!
Love this! I'm ready to go shoe shopping with him!
Simply FABULOUS!!
I wish I could wear them but I would probably break my ankle. Kudos to those who can wear them no matter who you are.
lolsssss
That was witty indeed!
I can wear them alright.. hey, do I have to walk or rrrr... stand?
Memento
Weekend Hugs xx
LOL!
I neither saw that coming.
And you will find something very interesting that pertains directly to YOU in the script after my 55.
It's here.
Perfect! I have a friend in Minneapolis named Brian who would kill for those stilettos.
LOve it MM..I once thought of purchasing a variety of large sized women shoes and sellin them to men...that was way before the internet came along! :D
You ALWAYS make me smile. :)
Now, please tell me you're not scheduling time this weekend to go buy a pair. ;)
Fiction! Flash FICTION Friday.
Spring MUST becoming - so much light, lively, exemplary versifyin' goin' on (yours is no exception).
Damn, I didn't think you saw me...
hope he found 'em...what a twist, excellent 55!
lol! Even though I've come to expect a brilliant twist in your 55s, Monkey Man, I'm always delighted and surprised every single time :)
This cracked me up!
It must be all this rain we are having, high heels are great puddle jumpers.
joanny
Ah ha ha. I love the twist. And I'm really enjoying the image of some guy trying to maneuver about in 6 inch heels.
Thank you for the twist at the end otherwise it would have been far too predictable and that is just not your style.
That was awesome!
Joanny's got the right idea. Jumping puddles is so much easier in good heels.
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