Wispy clouds
tried with all their might
to form dragons
and dogs
and angels
but the sun
melted them into nothingness.
Leaving the sky
a singular pallet of blue.
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30 comments:
Poof!!!
Do they have blue sky in Oregon?
I Played...G
Mahjong!!!!
I love this poem! Reminds me of desert skies in Arizona. Very cool!
Are you on vacation somewhere?
Thankfully it's a thick blanket of grey clouds here.. I guess we can safely call it a summer now- monsoons have arrived :) Will burst pour any moment now..
Brain- Storming
i think your clouds blew my way, but it made for a cooler day...i will take it..nice 160 monkey...
my 160
Monkey Man, each morning in Naples the sky is like yours..until the afternoon 2-hour 2-inch thunder showers. Nice 160
Yup, I played today just CLICK HERE
very nice!
Aloha from Waikiki :)
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That pallet of blue can be mesmerizing though.
Mine is up
Blue does it for me! HERE
Descriptive, effective.
Here's mine.
I found your clouds yesterday. Those dragons rained all over my yard sale. :(
I'm in on the 160...Mine is HERE.
I do love clouds but sometimes it is nice to see a flawless blue sky..so beautiful!
This is gorgeous, Monkey Man!
Mine's up!
I miss the clouds, its fun to turn them into animals in my head. When I'm not spoiling the mood, being all scientific and telling people how they dissipate because they're just gathering moisture... I must be so boring at cocktail parties.
I can see a very small dragon, but apart from that it's like that here too. Glad you're having a sunny Sunday!
My 160 are here
This is very impressive.
Love this.
I like this a lot. Clouds a mesmerizing, but sometimes a clear blue sky is so soothing, just what I need after a frantic week.
Blue skies need a bit of cloud stains for texture.
I played
very lovely! such a great subject.
my 160 is ready:
http://www.goddesswrite.com/2011/06/brazilian-treat.html
Beautiful. It reminded me of the suspended feeling I used to feel when I did springboard diving--there's a split second of soaring. I suspect our Arizona sky would burn any clouds that came on the horizon, but then we don't get clouds so I wouldn't know. Argh!
and hours later, here be
my entry.
http://fillingahole.wordpress.com/2011/06/26/born-of-flame/
awesome 160...
hope all is well.
here is
My 160!
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oh.. so nice post.)
Love your blog.))
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I now spend a survey of bloggers with such questions.
1. Why did you create a blog?
2. For whom you taking him? Want to be popular?
3. How long will it keep going?
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Love the way sky melts the fantasies,
to create more...
Here is mine:
radiating rays
Better late than never!!!
I've been watching clouds as I swim laps on my back at the community pool. They are so beautiful, like this poem. Pallet of blue alone -- smiple but lovely.
xo
I don't think I've ever seen a cloudless sky.
I always like it when they form breasts...
loved reading the poem and the cooments ... so much of the vast dome called sky ... intriguing :)
So this would be you bragging about your good weather? Yeah, I'm jealous.
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