The dreary backwater town
was big enough to not notice a stranger
yet too small to give complete anonymity.
All that was needed was
a few days to watch
the habits of his prey,
choose the best time to strike
and ponder how to make the kill.
He would show this evil bastard real predation.
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27 comments:
All types of nature in the raw there - the wild and the human.
Excellently done.
Looking forward to Part III MM, the suspense screams for it.
I'm up:
Friday Flash 55 ~ The Girl in the Mirror
perfect to kill
under one's will,
what a scary 55.
but enjoyed the suspense.
Ohh... shiver up my spine..That was a creepy 55 Monkey! Creepy but good (if you can put those 2 word sin one little sentence)
nice. so part 3 next week? wonder if he will et creative or just get it done...hmmm...
my 55 is up!
An anonymous backwater town eh?
Do they still exist?
I guess we'll soon find out .
Excellent 55 MM.
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen
Evil just takes it's time in the small streets... My Friday 55
Your mind is sometimes a little scary.
You are writing my favorite blog story so far. I need to know more. Please continue next week.
P.S. Thanks for the photo challenge, and Here’s my sick 55
I'm gonna agree with Katherine ---I probably won't be walking in your town anytime soon. ;)
Hope you have a terrific Friday!
Oooh, good one!
He's giving this a lot of thought.
ooooooooo dark and twisted. I like!
Nice one MM!!
I see you've been reading the standard insurance salesman training manual again ;)
The mystery continues. What a thriller this is :) I love the last line :) Well done :) Can't wait for Chapter 3 :) Have a great weekend :)
the story line grabs me...can't wait to read more!!
A strong topic. You have me in suspense.
Oh my gosh! I'm so excited that the saga continues. I can't wait to read more. Installments!
hhhmmmmm can't wait for part three
yes it's a true story I really hated to do what I did but then again he's been getting gas from me for quite some time now. I finally decided the only way to stop this is to step into a lower place than I like to be. So I bought five dollars of gas and then filled the rest of the can with water and placed it back in the truck with the rest of my equipment as I always did. The neighbor figured out that I filled my tanks for my gardening tools every Sunday night. He'd hit me early Monday Or Tuesday morning. I waited up at night just to see if I'd catch this guy and I finally did he thought he was slick doing what he was doing so I had to show him who was smarter than the average bear and it's going to cost him money just to clean out the gasline and the gas tank as you all know gas and water don't mix I really don't think he'll ever do it again if he does he's more of an idiot than I thought.
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Great post!
Great 55
as long as it stays on paper
moon *grin*
Uh-oh. Sounds like trouble in River City.
I'll be watching for Chapter 3.
Cheers,
jj
Sounds like your predator is severely miffed at his prey. Look forward to next installment. Thank you for you kind comments on my 55! :))
I'm hooked.....
ohhh. chilling...part 3 next week?
There has GOT to be a Part 3. :)
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