Friday, May 21, 2010

Road Trip Revenge 55 Part II

The dreary backwater town
was big enough to not notice a stranger
yet too small to give complete anonymity.
All that was needed was
a few days to watch
the habits of his prey,
choose the best time to strike
and ponder how to make the kill.

He would show this evil bastard real predation.
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28 comments:

anthonynorth said...

All types of nature in the raw there - the wild and the human.
Excellently done.

Chef Kar said...

Looking forward to Part III MM, the suspense screams for it.

I'm up:

Friday Flash 55 ~ The Girl in the Mirror

Jingle said...

perfect to kill
under one's will,
what a scary 55.
but enjoyed the suspense.

Katherine said...

Ohh... shiver up my spine..That was a creepy 55 Monkey! Creepy but good (if you can put those 2 word sin one little sentence)

Brian Miller said...

nice. so part 3 next week? wonder if he will et creative or just get it done...hmmm...

my 55 is up!

g-man said...

An anonymous backwater town eh?
Do they still exist?
I guess we'll soon find out .
Excellent 55 MM.
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen

John's comments said...

Evil just takes it's time in the small streets... My Friday 55

Tabor said...

Your mind is sometimes a little scary.

Enchanted Oak said...

You are writing my favorite blog story so far. I need to know more. Please continue next week.

Enchanted Oak said...

P.S. Thanks for the photo challenge, and Here’s my sick 55

Deb said...

I'm gonna agree with Katherine ---I probably won't be walking in your town anytime soon. ;)

Hope you have a terrific Friday!

PattiKen said...

Oooh, good one!

Alice Audrey said...

He's giving this a lot of thought.

Gillian said...

ooooooooo dark and twisted. I like!

Nice one MM!!

VE said...

I see you've been reading the standard insurance salesman training manual again ;)

Thom said...

The mystery continues. What a thriller this is :) I love the last line :) Well done :) Can't wait for Chapter 3 :) Have a great weekend :)

Caty said...

the story line grabs me...can't wait to read more!!

SandyCarlson said...

A strong topic. You have me in suspense.

Unknown Mami said...

Oh my gosh! I'm so excited that the saga continues. I can't wait to read more. Installments!

Larry said...

hhhmmmmm can't wait for part three

yes it's a true story I really hated to do what I did but then again he's been getting gas from me for quite some time now. I finally decided the only way to stop this is to step into a lower place than I like to be. So I bought five dollars of gas and then filled the rest of the can with water and placed it back in the truck with the rest of my equipment as I always did. The neighbor figured out that I filled my tanks for my gardening tools every Sunday night. He'd hit me early Monday Or Tuesday morning. I waited up at night just to see if I'd catch this guy and I finally did he thought he was slick doing what he was doing so I had to show him who was smarter than the average bear and it's going to cost him money just to clean out the gasline and the gas tank as you all know gas and water don't mix I really don't think he'll ever do it again if he does he's more of an idiot than I thought.

thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.Larry This Blog Of Mine

Stan Ski said...

If a job's worth doing, it's worth doing well...
Great post!

moondustwriter said...

Great 55
as long as it stays on paper

moon *grin*

Joanna Jenkins said...

Uh-oh. Sounds like trouble in River City.
I'll be watching for Chapter 3.
Cheers,
jj

Eaton Bennett said...

Sounds like your predator is severely miffed at his prey. Look forward to next installment. Thank you for you kind comments on my 55! :))

Marla said...

I'm hooked.....

evalinn said...

Cool!

Kristine@SaladBowlBlog said...

ohhh. chilling...part 3 next week?

hope said...

There has GOT to be a Part 3. :)