Sunday, February 7, 2010

Black Sunday 160


Black clouds pushed the horizon
into a vortex
of color sucking blindness.
Joy became sadness.
Beauty shriveled
to hideousness.
Love fell deep into indifference.
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If you wish to take the challenge, here is a quick look at the rules. For the original Sunday 160 post click here.

The Sunday 160 only uses 160 characters (including spaces)
Keep on schedule - post Sunday
Let me know you have posted via a comment on my site
Visit at least one other Sunday 160 (if they exist)

18 comments:

the walking man said...

Bummer. Stand inhale deeply and blow the clouds back were they came from.

Nessa said...

I can feel the clouds rolling in. Very well done.

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Brian Miller said...

heavy...i can see those clouds...my 160 will be up in a bit...

Brian Miller said...

alright...mine is up...

Ms Hen said...

So sad... so sad... but true.

I almost got engaged last year; and now when i think of him.. i feel NO LOVE for him at all .. except for the 'love we should feel for all humanity'.. but not a special man/woman love.

The more he revealed himself; the more i realized his true character and became judgmental; and than it turned into indifference.

The colors were once vibrant and vivid and than black..

so sad... thanks for this 160..

mine is up too now. (thanks for this each week)

Green-Eyed Momster said...

Powerful 160. Oh gosh, I hope those clouds stay away.

otin said...

Sounds like Monday Morning after the superbowl!

Unknown Mami said...

Ouch...indifference...from love to indifference...what could be worse?

Matty said...

Love can be just like a black cloud sucking you into a vortex.

lakeviewer said...

We must appreciate this new genre.

tattytiara said...

"pushed the horizon" - I really like that.

Marla said...

Really good and the picture is perfect.

Larry said...

I made it I know it's late for a Sunday–160 but I'm posted as of now just follow the link provided.


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nsiyer said...

Beautiful picture and amazing.

Mama Zen said...

"Color sucking blindness." That is really cool.

Cameron said...

verrryyy dark. almost feels like a black hole......great job conjuring emotion, as always!

Felicitas said...

Very powerful, MM! I can definitely relate to this.

justsomethoughts... said...

gold