Overcome with a passion
few could understand
he began the process
of undressing his victim.
Peeling a layer at a time
to reveal the milky white skin
he so loved to see, feel and taste.
Obsession?
Perversion?
The skin beckoned.
He opened his mouth
and bit hard,
tearing into his target.
God, he loved onions.
few could understand
he began the process
of undressing his victim.
Peeling a layer at a time
to reveal the milky white skin
he so loved to see, feel and taste.
Obsession?
Perversion?
The skin beckoned.
He opened his mouth
and bit hard,
tearing into his target.
God, he loved onions.
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34 comments:
Oh my, what a wickedly clever 55. Loved it.
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Oh, this one made me want to cry. :)
hmmmm kinda pervy or it seemed but after all it was great and I liked it look forward to reading you again.
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Wickedly funny. Enjoyed that.
For a minute there I thought I was going to need a cold shower! You had me going.
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what an amazing twist...i was really wondering where that one was going! marvelous 55!
mine is up!
Clever and provocative 55.
Lovely play on words ~ I too love onions, but prefer them sauteed in extra virgin olive oil :-)
I'm up:
Friday Flash 55 ~ DELETE
With peanut butter.
Very good! I love twists!
Now I really liked that 55. The end was a surprise.
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it
HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.
Arg! Onions with a twist!
I'm going to try to link my 55 here. You have to duck under Groucho Marx to find it.
Well, that didn't work. Try, try, try again.
It's like a layer cake. No, it's more like an onion.
Very funny 55.
Flash 55 - Blue Gill
Simply Superb, peeling layer at a time to undress was quite interesting. Enjoyed reading the Flash 55.
Onions are great unless I have to chop them!
Great 55 Monkey Man!
Sultry with a touch of suprise! Nice work!
Sundays are hard for me but I may take a look at your Sunday 160 and prepare something for next week!
Although I don't care for onions, your tasteful metaphor is delightful.
You sexy thing you!jeNN
Not kissing anybody today are you?
Excellent 55 Monkey Man!
I enjoy onions with most anything, and like Walking Man...With Peanut Butter!
Have a Kick-Ass Week End!
You definitely had me fooled! First I thought it was going to be naughty, then a vampire, then a surprise! I just love you clever REAL writers! Always fun to read. Enjoy your weekend.
Good one!
much love
Acccgggh!
I used to love onions, but then developed some weird reaction to them, and now they make me sick... literally. Even the smell makes me throw up. (!!)
Great Friday 55! Love it! :)
When my brother was tiny he used to eat onions like apples. I don't get it.
I thought he was a vampire. Good one!
Ha!!! Great 55!
I was ready to toss this out; then, I changed my mind and threw it on the grill with some olive oil. Delicious.
how perfect. although my mind at first didn't think of an onion, heee heee heee
OMG...this is just too awesome. Perfect my friend. :)
I never really thought of onions as sexy, but well now you've made them sexy for me! Great 55!
Love it, you've added a new twist to onions... I will never look at them the same, heehee! Thanks for visiting me :)
You little stinker you. ;)
I always love the ones that draw you in, then toss you a curve....with a laugh.
That is such a wonderful twist in the end! I never knew that eating a raw onion could be such an erotic experience! :D
Only if it's a walla walla sweet, silly.
I know this is an oldie, but clearly a goodie. I saw the pic of the bite being taken while reading the current poem about creepy Santa, and I thought the onion was a boob, so of course, I had to come over and check it out. Stop judging.
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