In the dark, damp space
he struggled
as he twisted his body
into the only position
he felt would give him
any sort of leverage.
He hated working under the sink.
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26 comments:
haha i do as well...smiles...had a leaky one a month or so back and had to spend far too much time under there...
see you in the morning.
Not me...I ley my fingers do the walkin!
Thanks for hosting...I Played.
That's when you bring in the pros!
Here's mine: The Memo
Oh, I know that feeling! And then the Teflon tape turns into a wad and the wrench slips.
Mine is up
One of the great advantages of being a woman is that I can follow the GALMI code (Get a little man in). For under-the-sink jobs a LITTLE man is useful!
I'm up here
Here is mine for this weak; sadly and hopefully a lesson learned.
http://lemoldman.blogspot.com/2011/11/state-secrets.html
And I can identify with that poor guy under the sink!
Larry
Was plumber's crack involved? Might have been an interesting sight!
I actually played using a dream of mine. You can find it HERE
mine is now up monkey!
http://www.waystationone.com/2011/11/160pj-taking-responsibility.html
Oh, the life of a gay divorcee ... I've been there, done that!!
what?!?
I live with a plumber so I don't have to deal with it.
Brian ... I have master (I mean mistress) plumbing skills!
... and here we go!
link_words
Greetings, Monkey Man! Oh, yes, that's a tough job under a sink.
Here's my offering for today: http://bodhirose.wordpress.com/2011/11/13/sisters/
you got the skills helen....
I love it!
Here is mine http://thedestinywithin.blogspot.com/2011/11/uncooked-is-best.html
It always rattles my brain when I try and smush down a poem into 160 characters... impressed to read yours and the others so far though!
I don't much like working under the sink either.
Mine is here (better late than never...)
I HATE working under the sink!
that almost made me feel claustrophobic
...and I played the 160 this week :)
Haha nice! I like this. I can't stand confined spaces, personally.
I can do that easier than get under the dashboard of a car which I can not do any more at all.
Great job! sorry I was away, hope you have a great week!
I like how the tone changed on this from creepy to funny - nice job.
I love how this poem ends! suprise!
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