Parting his lips slightly,
he curled the edges of his mouth
and revealed his dazzling smile.
He winked at his admirer,
who, not surprisingly,
winked back.
Ever the charmer
and always humble
he thought to himself,
“I’ve still got it,”
when a voice from behind him said,
“Quit worshipping yourself in the mirror, will ya.”
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28 comments:
MM - you will always "have it"
whatever "it" is
Smiles amigo
Nothing like the voice of reality to puncture our balloons. . . good read. =)
You've got to do something about those voices! Great tongue in cheek 55, MM.
Ha..ha.. I really enjoyed this...
Happy friday ~
Hmmmm... sounds like his wife walked in on him! :)
Always best to answer the voices out loud.
hard not to when you are so good looking eh? fun 55 monkey....
Poems about my ex, eh? Very well done.
I tried this myself, but the person in the mirror kept asking me why I agreed to turn 41 last year.
I don't know how to break it to her that 42 is fast approaching.
Maybe she'll be happy if I shut her up with some chocolate pudding.
Oh, and thanks for another Friday 55.
Mine's here. :)
Ouch! Busted again!
Now That was a reflective story KP!
You Da Man!! But You obviously knew that!! Hahahahaha
Loved your 55
Always well done.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Haha, I like the last sentence.
I love it! I needed to laugh!
The voice from behind just doesn't understand what it's like! Thanks for the smiles...loved it, very tounge in cheek.
I think I know him!
hahahahaha, that's awesome :)
lol! Sucks when you get caught :)
Ha! I always enjoy it when you go for the laugh. Funny!
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Worship huh? well at least he practices-
Mean old brother for sneakin' in where he doesn't belong! Good one, thanks!
Hahaha
That was unique and very witty too ... Great 55 ;)
OK, but the big question is... was he making kissie face at himself?
Such grand illusions we weave of our own images.
You've been spying on me at my mirror! Fun55
Sometimes you've just gotta take compliments where you can get them. :)
lolssss
Thanks for that laugh in the morning.. it's 9 in the morning here!!
weekend hugs xox
But did the mirror crack, is the question? LOL
lovely played 55,
Thanks for sharing.
I just giggled so loudly. I love your 55! I'm up too.
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