Once again, he found himself on the familiar front steps.
He felt safe and secure at last.
As he reached for the door,
it swung wide open with an aggressive force.
Stepping back,
he was greeted by an angry voice shouting,
“How many times do I have to tell you?
You live next door. ”
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27 comments:
haha...might have been a bit lit when stumbling up that stoop...lol
very clever... like the picture too!
oops!
You kill me, MM. Excellent! Apparently, Robert Downey Jr. Syndrome, eh?
bwahaha,
Ooops daisy, not agin... hick
Heh! :)
I like it.
And I like the picture of the weird door-knocker.
Booze?
French?
Can't read?
Thanks for playing KP
Have a Kick Ass Week-End
FUNNN-NEEE! I'm laughing, as I remember once a wife told me that I "lived next door". It was dark, and I was...well...YOU know!
Turned into a V E R Y embarrassing night and morning! No jail--the cops thought it was all too funny!
Thank for the memory, APE MAN! Is your first name Tarzan?
Funny stuff... : )
We have that trouble with a certain grey cat! Great 55.
I told a true story this week.
That's about how I feel towards people repeatedly dialing the wrong number! :p
a "Freudian" slip no doubt. it must be the French door knocker thing.
Joanny
LOL :o)
yikes! the memory is failing, is it...
What a hoot! I love your surprise endings!
Teresa
You got an out loud HA! from me on that one--I've done that with cars and shopping carts, but so far, not my house. Loved your Revenge of the Grannies story below, also. Have a great weekend.
Ah, but sometimes the neighbor's house is so comforting.
I love the picture of the knocker.
Hahaha! So funny! These are always so good. This is probably going to be me in about 40 years.
LOL That's funny!
I always worry about this...actually, one night I couldn't figure why my key wouldn't work..thankfully, they were not home, ha! Excellent 55 ~
LOL great.
How funny!
nice.
and also?
what a crazy picture...
That´s funny, with an unexpected turn at the end! :-)
{giggle}
i loved this ....couldn't stop laughing
Bwaahaahaa!
Thud.. that should do it..
hugs xxx
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