Tuesday, December 28, 2010

One Shot - Fate

Face to face for the first time
yet souls that had been together
for an eternity
connected,
safe,
familiar.
Feelings open and honest
brothers and sisters,
husbands and wives,
lovers
from another time and place
few gain this opportunity
and fewer still understand and follow.
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26 comments:

Brian Miller said...

there is something to the coming together physically that takes relationships to a new level...

Ben Langhinrchs said...

I like the idea of meeting for the first time, yet having been connected forever. Describes it well.

Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com said...

Wow, I need to come around here more often. Thanks for the great poem.
Happy new year.
xoRobyn

moondustwriter said...

Fate really does pull people together in the universe doesn't it? Interesting the way you communicate the idea.
Philosophical my dear MM

Thanks for the One Shot

G-Man said...

Kismet!!
Nice job MM...

dustus said...

Oh such a rare, precious connection you express. Worth one's lifetime to discover; and to never take for granted. Very well written.

❥ ќʀɨsтɨиɑ said...

Hello! I was here, asking for friendship. ;) Would you like to follow each others blogs? Advance Happy New Year. :D

razzamadazzle said...

Amazing how you capture that feeling of meeting someone for the first time knowing that you've been connected to them forever! Beautiful.

Teresa

hedgewitch said...

Affinity--it's one of the things that makes me wish I could believe in reincarnation. No explanation for it whatsoever...but it's one of the best things to find in this world.

PattiKen said...

And that's the way we would all hope it happens. Really lovely piece.

Diana Lee said...

This speaks volumes to me. A rare occurance but when it happens it steals the breath. Simply beautiful words.

Dulce said...

Yes, I guess we are destined to meet as if our fates are there ever since before we are born...
Loved this thought provoking One!
:)

Kenia Cris said...

Amazingly beautiful. Such bond is difficult for some people to belive, yet a few will know, deep in their hearts the connection is older than we can track.

My favorite One Shot today.

Kiss you MMan. Have a wonderful New Year. =*

Asobime said...

LOL! I was thinking of a really nice Xmas dinner amongst family and friends...

....not the usual Xmas dinner between family and friends....

LOL!

Sorry, your poem is much deeper than I am right now. Hitting the eggnog.

Cheers~

Lady Nyo

Claudia said...

this is really deep - coming together for the first time - connected, safe and familiar - speaks to me on different levels..

booguloo said...

The sooner the better.
Happy New Year.

thoughtsnotlost said...

What a delightful poem! Enjoyed this a lot!

Always Write said...

Hmm mystical - very intriguing

thanks for your visit

Glynn said...

There's something mystical in this -- suggested by the line "souls have been together for etnernity," Few have this opportunity; still fewer take hold of it. Nice one.

Brock S. Henning said...

I love stories like this, Monkey Man. How two souls just "know." Thanks for sharing.

Shewriting said...

beautiful poem...reminds me of a sandra bullock movie, i think called, the lake house, where her and k. reeves fall in love by writing letters to each other...only he is living in her past and she is living in her present...Thanks for the great one shot!

Shewriting said...

she is living in HIS FUTURE, is what I meant to type...

...guess its time for me to go to bed, I;m too slepy 2 to get the rite werds outa my brane... :)

budh.aaah said...

Face to face for the first time..and souls that have connected already on another level..magic

The Bipolar Diva said...

Few get that chance, only the lucky and the open get to re-explore those relationships that will stand the test of time.

Beachanny said...

All comments above I agree with; it's like bringing home a new baby from the hospital and in a day feeling as though it has been a part of you all your life. Those "meant to be relationships" are like that. How weird to make them in cyberspace and yet I have here. Well done you!
Gay @beachanny

Marla said...

Powerful stuff, MM. Well done.