Sunday, July 4, 2010

Sunday 160 - Fireworks


Excitement built with anticipation
of the big event.
His heart pounded.
Fireworks exploded.
It was his first kiss
and far better than he ever imagined it to be.
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For the original Sunday 160 post click here.
If you wish to take the challenge, here is a quick look at the rules.
The Sunday 160 only uses 160 characters (including spaces).
Keep on schedule - post Sunday.
Let me know you have posted via a comment on my site.
Visit at least one other Sunday 160.
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Happy Fourth of July!

28 comments:

Alice Audrey said...

He's so lucky to have such a great first kiss.

Mine is here.

kavisionz said...

A forever dreamed-of kiss!! :) Lovely 160!!

Here is mine...
Thanks!!!

Brian Miller said...

like thoses kinda kisses...pop...boom...pow! my 160 is up!

Mrsupole said...

The first is always the best. Well it is for most things, well except for things that cause pain.

Happy Fourth of July to you.

Great 160.

God bless.

Brian Miller said...

monkey,

double dipping today...here is my second 160...

http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/2010/07/rear-view-relationships-poem-in-160.html

or you can just hit the link at the bottom of my post...

One Stop - The Place For Poets & Writers said...

happy 4th july to one and all. Being a brit not quite the same for me but i hope you all have a great day celebrating kicking the like of me out of your country!!!

A great 160, mine it at the following link

http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/2010/07/secret-poem-in-160-characters.html

cheers

Pete

f82bfat said...

always the romantic. Nice 160. Mine is up. Happy 4th of July.

PattiKen said...

Oh, you romantic devil, you. Very sweet.

My 160 is up here.

Dianne said...

sweet,
mine is up,
keep writing MM.
have you heard the tune, "I wanna be like you?" from the Jungle Book? thought of your playlist!

Dianne

Mama Zen said...

I like this one!

Happy 4th Monkey Man!

Chris said...

Aw, I love that it was about his first kiss. I'm such a romantic. That was great :) I hope his every kiss is fireworks.

The Bipolar Diva said...

Very nice. I think I remember those days.

Green-Eyed Momster said...

Great post, as always!

Very nice!

Happy 4th Monkey Man!

marie said...

I love first kisses. DH kisses still feel like that! Happy 4th. Mine 160 is ready at marie-experience-strength-hope.blogspot.com

Jingle said...

what festive 160.

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/07/04/sunday-160-everyone-adores-u/

here is mine!
many thanks!

Julie Jordan Scott said...

Happy to be here, reading of a fantabulous first kiss and discovering this prompting website.

Read My First Ever Sunday 160 here.

moondustwriter said...

Those first kisses will do that and second and third

happy 4th MM

I'm late sorry (practicing my first kiss)

It's the forth!

Enchanted Oak said...

I hope all your kisses are like first kisses.
I'm late in the day but here in spite of myself:
Peace or Boredom?

Larry said...

Wow remembering my first kiss I can't do it? Hmmmmmmmmmmmm does that make me a slut because I don't remember her? eeek gosh I hope not.


Forth Of July
Thanks For Reading.

gospelwriter said...

Wow, awesome fireworks! Awesome 160!

My first attempt is at http://gospelwriter.wordpress.com/2010/07/04/black-oystercatcher-2/.

Monkey Man said...

Larry - Sorry I couldn't access you blog. But I will continue to try.

Gospelwriter - Read your 160 - very nice, but was unable to leave a comment.

sakhii•• said...

nice blog!

Matty said...

Yep, I remember a kiss like that. And it wasn't the 4th of July. It was the 3rd.

jessicasjapes said...

Came from Jingle, on Monday - oh bum!
Anyways...here's 160:

I thought haikus were a pain
Until Jingle said use 160 and refrain
So much to say, so few characters to use
No margin for error I muse
Precision is key to keep sane!

Larry said...

Never fear about the time bandits I know you'll make it when you can.
I'm having the same problem with the comment secrion I did write to blogger about it. But I don't know how long it takes em to search the problem out.Thanks for stopping by



Monkey Man

Joanna Jenkins said...

That put a great big smile on my face!
Nice job,
jj

Marla said...

I remember that kiss. It came from the guy snoring next to me right now ... 38 years ago. :-)