Thursday, May 27, 2010

Road Trip Revenge III - a 55

Sitting on the edge of the bed,
with visions of a disemboweled body
left in an area know to inhabit wolves.
Mouth stuffed with its own intestines.
Eyes blinking in disbelief
as it slowly drained
of life giving fluids.
It all seemed so real,
yet he had to ask himself
– was it just a dream?
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31 comments:

Alice Audrey said...

Dream? Or Nightmare? Youch.

moondustwriter said...

Ack back at you
or should I be screaming
happy Friday MM

Gillian said...

Its should be entitled Freaky Friday!

Great work, Minky

anthonynorth said...

Here's hoping it was just a dream. Nicely done.

Stan Ski said...

I'm with Alice... 'Dream' sounds like he wanted it to be so - perhaps he did...

Kristine@SaladBowlBlog said...

yikes. gory stuff but very descriptive. mine here

Brian Miller said...

i must say intestines leave a terrible taste in your mouth so i hope its a dream...

nice 55 monkey!

California Girl said...

(sharp intake of breath)

whoa!

John's comments said...

Creepy! my 55 here

G-Man said...

Chitterlins for supper?
Excellent 55 MM.
You be a dark and deep Mofo!
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Holiday Week-End...G

willow said...

I'm thinking Jack Nicholson here, in Wolf.

Unknown Mami said...

Where will this lead? Scary.

Caty said...

I would call that a nightmare! the visualization you supplied grossed me out and I'm a nurse. Great writing!!

Titanium said...

Super grim! Ackkkkkk. (Spits to remove marbled tastebuds)

Well done, MM. You dredged a dark place with this one and came up with a winner.

drybottomgirl said...

Great imagery. I little gruesome but easy to picture! Have an awesome 55!

Donda said...

GRODY! I think I just threw up a little. Thought my mind was morbid! LOL

Vodka Logic said...

Lets hope it is a nightmare.. otherwise omg...

Have a great weekend.

My 55 is up.

PattiKen said...

Holy smokes! This story is getting really...um, nightmarish!

(My captcha is 'budpan." Do you suppose that's the one my friend had in the hospital?)

The Bipolar Diva said...

Yikes! Great visual.
Reminds me of the dreaded and feared Chupacabra.

Lulda Casadaga said...

Me loves de Wolfman! :P
Have a low-cal plasma weekend!!

The Silver Fox said...

Pretty gruesome. Loved it!

Hope you check out my Flash 55!

Me said...

Every now and then, I've sat on the edge of the bed myself: crazy horrible images still fresh behind my eyes. The ones that feel real are the worst, no?

Great 55, this one got me good.
-C

Buzzard said...

A testimony of why not to watch television programs geared toward eating bizarre foods before bedtime.

Mona said...

I thought it was surrealistic !

Gillena Cox said...

creepy stuff

much love
gillena

Larry said...

cool monkey man I like your fifty five.
Larry

Prayer Girl said...

We can only hope so......

My Sunday 160 is up.

I'll be back later to read your 160.

PG

PattiKen said...

My 160 offering is up here. It's Sunday here! I'll be back in the morning to read yours.

Enchanted Oak said...

MM, this would make a buzzard puke. Installment # 4 is going to be a challenge.

Jingle said...

awesome tale!

Katherine said...

No, no..not a dream Mr Monkey.. a terrible, icky sounding nightmare!