Thursday, September 3, 2009

55 Thanks isn't enough


Can you thank someone who has made sacrifices and
worked until they dropped?
Handled adversity and taken care of the sick,
knowing all along they needed a hand to hold
or a shoulder to cry on
when none was available.
It may not be much,
but take my hand and accept my love.
You’re deserving.


This is a Flash Fiction Friday 55.
If you want to know what the hell that means visit g-man. The challenge is on.
Or Try my Sunday 160.

14 comments:

g-man said...

I somehow think that a simple Thank You may be all thats needed.
Excellent 55 MM...
I read your previous post as well.
Hats off to you brother...
Thanks for visiting, and helping to make Fridays so much fun.
Have a Kick-Ass Week-End....G

Tall Kay said...

Excellent 55 and great reminder that "in giving we receive". My first time here...nice to meet you!

the walking man said...

By not being "much" and by being offered from the heart; there is no bigger thing to lean on.

Lou said...

This was great-- simple, lyrical, and from the heart. Thanks..

I also read your previous post. I'm a CT technician, and I love a happy ending. The part at the end where the tech says "get up, I got another body waiting" made me wonder if I sound like that. Some days are so busy, I know I rush people. Anyway, it was interesting to see it through your eyes.

And...God bless.

Hootin' Anni said...

Wow...this is poignant in so little words...excellent job.

My 55 is posted here [as always, scroll down below my Friday's show n tell.] And, have a great weekend!!

Dr.John said...

I will remember that when I need it.
Great 55

Mine is posted
HERE.

Jessie said...

How true, how true...

smiles,

Mona said...

indeed they are deserving! My hand stretches out to them too!

Alice Audrey said...

How wonderful to be moved enough to offer a needed hand. So many people, if they see the need at all, are afraid to reach out.

Brother Frankie said...

i know one..

short and pointed. great job

im 55ing today.

http://spankieg.blogspot.com/2009/09/friday-flash-fifty-five-elevator-down.html


be blessed
Brother Frankie

anthonynorth said...

An excellent message in this one. Nicely done.

Lulda Casadaga said...

Sometimes it's hard to thank the ones who deserve it the most. Nice 55...
I'll be think about you on the
16th!

Mama Zen said...

This is really lovely.

clean and crazy said...

this is a very inspiring and hopeful 55, well done