tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post2314342440674702379..comments2023-11-05T02:39:09.527-08:00Comments on Monkey Man: Take PauseMonkey Manhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-89562305972588416642009-12-16T15:25:58.704-08:002009-12-16T15:25:58.704-08:00This could be about me.This could be about me.Claudya Martinezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17034216831504207496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-50189372311424346252009-12-16T11:43:33.878-08:002009-12-16T11:43:33.878-08:00Like a venomous strike, you may survive, but the w...Like a venomous strike, you may survive, but the wounds will always be there.....G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-48541467546833844922009-12-16T05:22:07.199-08:002009-12-16T05:22:07.199-08:00That was f'ing great. 'nuf said.That was f'ing great. 'nuf said.Bubbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13387278341086830951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-26585491411967888432009-12-16T03:14:59.760-08:002009-12-16T03:14:59.760-08:00wow, hadn't thought about it quite like this b...wow, hadn't thought about it quite like this before. yet it rings very true...Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-50699041605333438912009-12-15T17:58:53.222-08:002009-12-15T17:58:53.222-08:00Great post Monkey Man. I will take your advice to...Great post Monkey Man. I will take your advice too! <br />Thanks, TGreen-Eyed Momsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10175981627284967050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-51573919116003387502009-12-15T17:56:50.652-08:002009-12-15T17:56:50.652-08:00I really like this line, "The rattle quickens...I really like this line, "The rattle quickens,<br />sending surges<br />through the thoughts"<br />It's a great analogy/metaphor/struggle.<br /><br />and a great release to the valve of taking direct action...love that about writing.Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18323454057921441274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-85379707727090115392009-12-15T17:43:24.776-08:002009-12-15T17:43:24.776-08:00Ah, the viper strike, the uncoiled response, the a...Ah, the viper strike, the uncoiled response, the automatic lashing out. Well put.Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-36682951455029262362009-12-15T17:05:11.682-08:002009-12-15T17:05:11.682-08:00Excellent writing here.Excellent writing here.The Peach Tarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01587235197620014751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-91502544588146240502009-12-15T16:48:53.017-08:002009-12-15T16:48:53.017-08:00Hmmm...liked this very much. I wish all people wo...Hmmm...liked this very much. I wish all people would think before lashing out words of anger they don't mean like a snake.Little Ms Bloggerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17208746635976950728noreply@blogger.com