tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post1632238177221949812..comments2023-11-05T02:39:09.527-08:00Comments on Monkey Man: Winter Warnings - A One ShotMonkey Manhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-9690704839203165612010-12-08T22:11:04.391-08:002010-12-08T22:11:04.391-08:00WonderfulWonderfulMarlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18000815937078399278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-81055688891890120622010-11-20T12:01:16.494-08:002010-11-20T12:01:16.494-08:00we just had a real pea souper yesterday morning......we just had a real pea souper yesterday morning...your wonderful verse made me think of this right away...great share peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-49483133382603178342010-11-18T05:46:04.334-08:002010-11-18T05:46:04.334-08:00i loved the soft focus...the gel covered lense..gr...i loved the soft focus...the gel covered lense..great imagery!Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-26527064644539342862010-11-17T10:19:15.270-08:002010-11-17T10:19:15.270-08:00I loved the imagary you used here. I'm one of ...I loved the imagary you used here. I'm one of these winter lovers always opting for layers instead of the bikini! Excellent penmanship monkeyman ;)<br /><br /><br />Shan <br /><br />@AwduresAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-26829797690303105932010-11-17T08:48:25.141-08:002010-11-17T08:48:25.141-08:00A great picture of winter's coming... I enjoye...A great picture of winter's coming... I enjoyed it so much...<br />Thanks for sharing...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-45412912734571292482010-11-17T06:39:32.367-08:002010-11-17T06:39:32.367-08:00Strong, well-delivered word choice that forms pote...Strong, well-delivered word choice that forms potent imagery and description. Enchanting piece as the winter encroaches...not long now.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-19033563966837437732010-11-17T05:39:02.066-08:002010-11-17T05:39:02.066-08:00wonderful imagery monkey...clinging to the last li...wonderful imagery monkey...clinging to the last little bit of fall here this morning....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-18777176431587642772010-11-17T02:36:19.564-08:002010-11-17T02:36:19.564-08:00awesome welcome to winter!awesome welcome to winter!Gabriela Abalohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11316879938383542026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-8673720907288635732010-11-17T01:43:29.893-08:002010-11-17T01:43:29.893-08:00I loved the images you conjured with this lovely p...I loved the images you conjured with this lovely piece of writing, just wonderful.Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-61368646003615854252010-11-16T23:57:57.754-08:002010-11-16T23:57:57.754-08:00lovely piece of writing and piercing imagery......lovely piece of writing and piercing imagery...'The cold steam released a shiver to penetrate<br />even the most heavily bundled.' i like!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-58232565097180066622010-11-16T23:39:23.586-08:002010-11-16T23:39:23.586-08:00And yet I wait for winter all year longAnd yet I wait for winter all year longbudh.aaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13277544197089022458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-72805279541382136582010-11-16T22:05:26.962-08:002010-11-16T22:05:26.962-08:00this is aluring poetry.
assonance/conssonance I ca...this is aluring poetry.<br />assonance/conssonance I cant resist: " smoky shroud obscured structures"<br /><br />I see what you see.<br />DiDiannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18323454057921441274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-9391863774773140382010-11-16T20:19:39.101-08:002010-11-16T20:19:39.101-08:00You paint a realistic early winters night in da ci...You paint a realistic early winters night in da city.<br /><br /><br /><br />Brrrr!<br /><br /><br /><br />Aloha from Waikiki :)<br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /><br />><}}(°><br /><br /><br /><°)}}><Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-84186849152963598572010-11-16T20:02:19.385-08:002010-11-16T20:02:19.385-08:00I came, I saw, I retreated to Cal.I came, I saw, I retreated to Cal.Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-7324452934123539492010-11-16T20:00:51.329-08:002010-11-16T20:00:51.329-08:00We've had some foggy mornings that have just c...We've had some foggy mornings that have just changed ordinary to extraordinary. I bundled up and had to head out early to photograph it and it felt like you say:<br /><br />"The cold stream released a shiver<br /> to penetrate<br /> even the most heavily bundled." <br /><br />What a wonderful piece of writing.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-83373240301466507462010-11-16T19:52:37.339-08:002010-11-16T19:52:37.339-08:00I like foggy days and this put me in mind of the s...I like foggy days and this put me in mind of the silent mystery of them.Katherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-83947174751103861452010-11-16T19:31:00.800-08:002010-11-16T19:31:00.800-08:00distorted radiance - what a great view thru the le...distorted radiance - what a great view thru the lens MM<br />You really cast a shadow on this One shot<br /><br />Moon smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-22686122902391212032010-11-16T19:09:51.872-08:002010-11-16T19:09:51.872-08:00yep winter's almost here. Your brilliant writ...yep winter's almost here. Your brilliant writing reminded me why I dread it's return...Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-76055693663540734912010-11-16T18:48:34.055-08:002010-11-16T18:48:34.055-08:00I like all the imagery of winter and every so ofte...I like all the imagery of winter and every so often like to experience it. Through your words may be best. Well written, thanks Gay @beachannyBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-83213586120417436722010-11-16T18:47:09.087-08:002010-11-16T18:47:09.087-08:00Awwww...
Seasons change.
Winter does have a strang...Awwww...<br />Seasons change.<br />Winter does have a strange raging/silent beauty.<br />Great Job Brother....Gg-manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05597285773359986622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-63174253901924184232010-11-16T18:46:22.019-08:002010-11-16T18:46:22.019-08:00I love winters and this is so beautiful...
forgon...I love winters and this is so beautiful...<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/11/foregone-and-forgotten.html" rel="nofollow">forgone and forgotten</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-30880216202751963892010-11-16T18:07:28.376-08:002010-11-16T18:07:28.376-08:00I hate to think of winter's coming, but you ma...I hate to think of winter's coming, but you make it seem somewhat beautiful even though I'm not ready to freeze my butt off yet.<br /><br />TeresaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-29549846947671225812010-11-16T17:36:12.189-08:002010-11-16T17:36:12.189-08:00Hmmm...I don't think I'd mind so much if i...Hmmm...I don't think I'd mind so much if it was just like this, all the time.<br /><br />This is quite lovely, MM. And I hate winter, so kudos to you for getting me with this one. :)<br />-CMehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11352940156473227821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-33788446099634774982010-11-16T17:29:04.315-08:002010-11-16T17:29:04.315-08:00You say it so gracefully. But no matter, I hate t...You say it so gracefully. But no matter, I hate the cold weather that winter brings. BRRRRRRRMattyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979949404266325705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8189125011913017491.post-392214374914800412010-11-16T17:20:29.983-08:002010-11-16T17:20:29.983-08:00I could actually SEE this, MM. No, really! I looke...I could actually SEE this, MM. No, really! I looked out the window and it seemed to mirror the words you've written. Uncanny.<br /><br />Excellent One Shot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com